1hyphenation
Before: socio economic
After: socio-economic
Compound modifiers before nouns require hyphenation in formal writing to avoid ambiguity.
2hyphenation
Before: anti corruption
After: anti-corruption
Standardized hyphenation is required for compound modifiers, particularly common terms like anti-corruption.
3article usage
Before: Pakistan, to remain in the hot water of corruption dilemma.
After: Pakistan remains in the hot water of the corruption dilemma.
The original is a fragment and lacks the definite article 'the' before 'corruption dilemma.' Converting to a complete clause with correct article usage resolves the error.
4currency specification
Before: 8.5 trillion of economic growth
After: Rs 8.5 trillion in economic output
Quantities must specify currency and use the correct preposition 'in' rather than 'of' to indicate magnitude.
5possessive/apostrophe
Before: According to Transparency International report from 2008 to 2021
After: According to Transparency International's reports from 2008 to 2021
Use the possessive form to indicate ownership and pluralize 'report' because the time span implies multiple publications.
6capitalization
Before: corruption perception (CPI)
After: Corruption Perceptions Index (CPI)
Proper nouns, formal index names, and acronyms require correct capitalization and full titles.
7subject–verb agreement
Before: Transparency International statistic its show that
After: Transparency International's statistics show that
Plural 'statistics' takes a plural verb 'show' and the possessive resolves 'its' misuse.
8comma usage
Before: Among all these the police is the most corrupt
After: Among all these, the police are the most corrupt
Introductory phrase requires a comma. In British/Pakistani English, 'police' is treated as a plural collective noun.
9preposition
Before: conducive corruption
After: conducive to corruption
The adjective 'conducive' takes the preposition 'to'.
10spelling
Before: ligitation
After: litigation
Correct spelling required in formal writing.
11spelling
Before: predominate features
After: predominant features
Use the adjective 'predominant' rather than the verb 'predominate' in this context.
12article usage
Before: In the same manner, government should digitize
After: In the same manner, the government should digitize
Definite article is required before a singular countable noun when referring to a specific entity.
13spelling
Before: esndite
After: expedite
Correct spelling improves clarity and professionalism.
14word form
Before: identity the tax evaders
After: identify the tax evaders
Use the verb 'identify' rather than the noun 'identity'.
15gerund/participle
Before: by adoption new technology
After: by adopting new technology
Use the gerund form after prepositions.
16number agreement
Before: for speedy trial
After: for speedy trials
Plural 'trials' is standard in judicial contexts when referring to the court process generally.
17contraction
Before: Likewise, it's important
After: Likewise, it is important
Avoid contractions in formal academic prose.
18hyphenation/comma
Before: corruption free fair society
After: corruption-free, fair society
Compound adjectives should be hyphenated and coordinate adjectives separated by a comma when appropriate.
19comma splice
Before: Further, corruption is a global dilemma that cannot be particularized to a single nation however, it has severe implications
After: Further, corruption is a global dilemma that cannot be confined to a single nation; however, it has severe implications
Use a semicolon (or full stop) before a conjunctive adverb to avoid a comma splice.
20capitalization
Before: Pakistan Bureau of Statistic Reports
After: Pakistan Bureau of Statistics (PBS) reports
Correct the proper name of the institution and add recognized abbreviation if used later.
21word choice/tense
Before: has born a cause
After: has been a cause
The past participle of 'bear' in this sense is 'borne'; however, the idiomatic construction here is 'has been a cause' or 'has given rise to'.
22article/comma
Before: by the collaborative efforts of concerned authorities Pakistan can build
After: By the collaborative efforts of the concerned authorities, Pakistan can build
Add definite article and a comma after the introductory prepositional phrase.
23terminology
Before: Corruption Perception (CPI)
After: Corruption Perceptions Index (CPI)
Ensure official terminology is accurate for credibility.
24word form
Before: economical foundation
After: economic foundation
'Economic' relates to the economy; 'economical' means inexpensive.
25comma usage
Before: Despite the dreadful corruption statistics in the country and all negative implications there are some reasons behind it.
After: Despite the dreadful corruption statistics in the country and all their negative implications, there are reasons behind it.
Comma needed after a long introductory dependent clause; pronoun 'their' clarifies antecedent.